For a few days, I’ll be posting my sketches for panels. After awhile I’ll post full pages, but I’m building up slowly. I’m looking for criticism, particularly on style consistency, likenesses and energy in the drawings. Much obliged!

Firefly: Dead or Alive Pg.1, Pan.1, 11/30/07

Script

A motley group of immigrant workers walk down the ramp onto the dirt of a border planet. MAL and an equally motley bulbous man, the CASHIER, count them as they walk off.

MAL
Thirteen. Fourteen. Fifteen.
Seventeen.

CASHIER
(bored)
Sixteen.