Firefly - Dead or Alive, p1 pencils
Pencils for page 1 of Firefly: Dead or Alive, 12/06/07 (Clicky for bigger)
Feedback is welcome! The script for the page is after the jump.
Page 1
EXT. SERENITY RAMP - NIGHT
Panel 1
A motley group of immigrant workers walk down the ramp onto the dirt of a border planet. MAL and an equally motley bulbous man, the CASHIER, count them as they walk off.
MAL
Thirteen. Fourteen. Fifteen.
Seventeen.
CASHIER
(bored)
Sixteen.
Panel 2
MAL
Hey, that beefy guy easily ate enough
for two.
CASHIER
Sixteen. Seventeen. Eighteen.
Panel 3
Mal points to a skinny guy off to the side of a larger guy.
MAL
I believe we’re up to nineteen.
CASHIER
He was number seven.
Panel 4
MAL
Guess you could be right. Must’ve
forgot his knapsack. Eighteen.
This page just freakin rocks! Sheesh, really nice! Give me a comic full of this Glimbit goodness and Id be pleased as punch!
Excellent page! The cashier has a great distinctive look. I also like the mother in the second panel, and all the depth with the fire. Your Mal expression in the last panel is steller!
What’s that baby in the second panel’s foreground doing?
That’s up to the imagination of you, the gentle viewer!
will there be more? are you doing the whole episode?
I hope to finish it eventually, or at least get to the good part of the story.