Teen Titans: page 3!
Page 3, in which a teenage devil takes mac n’ cheese from the fridge. 01/11/08
I love a three-panel page! It was fun to use the space, add some quiet spots. I usually cram a bunch of stuff up close. This one doesn’t have the claustrophobia I normally make.
Thanks for the feedback so far, friends-o-mine. More junk after the more…
Script
PAGE SIX.
PANEL ONE.
A nice big shot of the Titans Tower kitchen. It’s large, like one of those kitchens on television with the islands in the center. Huge window over the sink look out on to San Francisco. The sink is full of dirty dishes. There are plates piled high but not comical. Just as if it’s been a few days since they did them. On top of the refrigerator is the SWEAR JAR, which is aptly labeled. It’s stuffed FULL of five-dollar bills, singles and change. CYBORG walks in to see:
KID DEVIL is clinging to the side of the refrigerator door, which is open, digging through a bunch of old leftovers. There’s a pizza box, Chinese food, Tupperware containers. He currently is holding an open Tupperware container with macaroni & cheese inside.
RAVAGER is in costume, mask OFF, at the island in the kitchen. She’s been sharpening her swords, knives, throwing stars, etc. They are all laid out on a new blue satin piece of fabric. She is currently sharpening her sword on a large sharpening stone on the island, which is supposed to be used for dinner knives and such.
1. KID DEVIL: …HOT DAMN!
2. KID DEVIL: Cyborg’s awake!
3. RAVAGER: YOUR turn to feed the swear jar.
PANEL TWO.
Cyborg takes a step into the kitchen, raising his arm. It begins to TRANSFORM into the WHITE SOUND GENERATOR we’re used to. But now, his CIRCUITS and CIRCLES on his uniform, everything that should glow RED glows BLUE. There should be some blue glowing circuitry on his WHITE SOUND GENERATOR as well. Ravager realizes that Cyborg thinks she’s an enemy. She takes a step back from him.
4. CYBORG (SHAKY): R-Ravager?!
5. RAVAGER: Looks like there’s no BRAIN damage. He remembers me…
SFX: VUMMMMM
PANEL THREE.
Thin panel along the bottom of the page. Tight on Rose Wilson realizing what’s about to happen. Cyborg thinks she’s an enemy.
6. RAVAGER: …uh, oh.
7. RAVAGER: He REMEMBERS me.
Thumbs for page 3, 01/11/08
Thumbs went quickly this time. Three-panel pages are the best.
Rough! 01/11/08
Why did I think drawing just her top lip was a good idea? Ha. Fixed it in the final.
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Wow…just wow. This treatment is turning out fantastic my friend. Just top notch! I hope you have plans to shop this stuff around at some conventions/shows. This is great stuff. Would love to see the originals. Any chance of posting a hi-res scan of a page? Pretty please with barbecue sauce on top?
How many more pages of this storyline are there? I’m amazed at the detail they go into for inside the fridge and stuff, yet nothing about the expressions characters are to have, etc. LOL!
Hey man, thanks for the encouragement. I’ll post some bigger images, too. There are a few details that are lost in these small images, but I’m trying to work more economically overall. What kind of barbecue sauce are we talking about here?
I’m going to do 2 more pages. It’s a nice fight scene that comes to a resolution at the end of the second page.
Your observation is hilarious and dead-on. The writer and artist for this script seemed to have a close relationship, so I’m assuming the writer left some details out because they already discussed them. Just a guess.
I love all the details in the kitchen, and how you created such a great sense of space with the high ceiling, and depth all the way to the skyline outside.
He used a special program I created, Kitchen Kreator 2.4, for just such an aspect of drawing. It is for the inherently lazy artist who happens to be sketching kitchen scenes. Used mostly by manufacturers for making advertisements. Hasn’t taken off yet. We hope it will soon.
Now, on to the breasts. I am a breat man and I like these you show here. However, I am troubled by the probability that this woman not only could, but will, kick my ass for looking at them. Bring her down below 90 lb weakling and I might stand a fighting man’s chance.